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Tuesday, January 20, 2009

Friend Prompt

Many words describe me as a friend. Nice would be the word to best describe me. being nice includes always liking to help out your friends. If they are in pain inside or out i am always there by there side to comfort.

When they need someone for them i am there helping them through all there issues at home, school it doesnt matter.

I make sure nothing i say will hurt my friend even if im in a bad arguement with them.

Being nice should be in every friendship. being a nice friend isnt hard at all, thats why i am so good at being a nice friend.

6 comments:

[=♫KaŁħܠ€€N♫=] said...

ashley i love your prompt and i think you are really nice. you really don't need anything.

zane malle said...

Hi, the things that you did good were following the prompt,and describing nice. you need to work on adding more vivid details, and putting in a better hook.

Tyler Manuel said...

ahley, your prompt was exilent but i think that you need to make ur paragraphs easyer to understand.

lena terrazas said...

Dear Ashley
your peice was very good and very interesting and i think thet you could wark on the way that you do your paragraphs but other wiz it was a totally ROCKIN piece

The voice said...
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The voice said...

i LIKE THE WAY YOU NARROWED DOWN what desribed you as a friend